So, I didn’t
receive a lot of feedback on my previous pitches because I actively tried to
avoid filming myself. However, I missed too many points in this class to
continue doing so. Now Here is my first pitch, and I hope you guys like it.
I focused
on being dynamic. This means focusing on being relaxed and expressing my
personality versus simply stating the service I’m trying to pitch.
Well it definitely is a first attempt, but I am glad to see it for the first time. It is important to fix some aspects such as your speech flow, your posture, and your skills because you want to look as comfortable as you can be when presenting because it is your presentation that will sell to audience. But overall, a very good first attempt.
ReplyDeleteHey Mitchell,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch and your enthusiasm that you portrayed all throughout, it really drew me in and made me listen to what you had to say. I was genuinely debating if 5 dollars would be better put to use in some other way than just having a clean sink, but I don't think it can be put to any better use! You had a catchy hook and were excellent at delivering your message.
Hi Mitch,
ReplyDeleteI think your first attempt on this elevator pitch was good overall, but I think it can improve by being dressed in business attire. Also, I think it would have been better if you stood up. Overall, I think your elevator pitch was very interesting and convincing. Wish we got to see the first two attempts!